I'll change the commas.

You change the world.

Carley Lyon

Writer | Editor | Proofreader

Clients & Partners

My Services

Those in Motion LLC


I'm Carley. I'm a writer, editor, and proofreader, and I love working with people and organizations who are making the world better.

If you need someone to write original content, edit your content to maximize its impact, or serve as a "last line of defense" proofreader for your communications, I would be delighted to work with you.

You've got a business to run, funds to raise, lives to change. Let me do the writing while you make a difference.

Clients & Partners

My Services

Rustic Bookstore Element


  • Executive ghostwriting
  • Newsletters
  • Marketing e-blasts
  • Social media
  • Website content
  • Grant writing and reporting
Rustic Bookstore Element


  • Substantive editing to improve structure, content, and flow

  • Copy editing, fact checking, style guide compliance
Rustic Bookstore Element


  • Serving as a "last line of defense" to correct all errors before publishing


AP Style

Executive Ghostwriting


Donor-Centered Language

Human Interest Stories

Pediatric Health Care

Let's work together!

Those in Motion LLC

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